Ozzy Ozborne's blog

-Did I write the memoir smothly?

-Are my sentances too choppy?

-Does my story jump around?

-Is the story repetitive? Do the sentance all start the same?

-Does the dialoge make sense?

Editing

-Grammar

-Spelling

-Saying the same word to much

-Sentace structure

-Word choice

          I learned that you make more mistakes than you realize. You can leap all of those mistakes just by doing this list. So I will be adding a concluding paragraph, fixing verbs to make it sound more intense. I will be trying to avoid contractions, and other errors. Thats my list of things to do.