Ozzy Ozborne's blog

                  There was goodsentance fluencey. I liked the storyline. It was well put together. It needed to be finished.

                  I need to work on my spelling and maybe some grammar. I need to fix some  kinds of sentance fluency. I am goin to fix these things by having my mom edit it. I will also  try to edit it myself. After this I will have a finished draft.